You know
The path by now
So why are you surprised
When you feel the darkness, chew it,
Swallow
It down
Until it becomes you, hungry
You search in vain for light
For this will fill
Your life
The lies
You were told fall
To the ground where you lie
Hungering for the truth to feed
Your soul
You writhe
Knowing that only the darkness
Glows while the light consumes
Until you die
Shrivelled
Only
In the darkness
Can you find your true self
Like a seed sprouting in the soil
Don’t fear
The dark
Or believe the lies you are told
Only the darkness shows
Up the bright stars
Rest now
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This is what I call a great end !!!
Truly motivating…I luv the way u play with words…keeping short and so precise… 🙂
Keep Writing
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Thanks. I often write in this form. Sometimes jyst one stabza, sometimes a few put together. This form is called a mirror cinquain, a form of poetry I learned whilst studying writing. I like to use it becayse you can pack anlot of meaning into just a few words. It is quite a challenging form to use. Yes, Ibdo like to playvwith words,lol. Thanks for the compliment – smile x
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Well i guess u taught me something new…will definately try this out in next post…I would like to know more on this…will research this ….
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It is really interesting. I love using dufferent poetic forms. I will post some in dufferent forms. I often use the vilanelle too. It is a great challenge and fun to do.
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Sure pls do that…i like learning new styles….thanks
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