A MIRROR CINQUAIN
Inside
A secret flame
Burns strong even when dark
It lights my path, illuminates,
I walk
In light
Not brilliant but just enough
To keep me holding on
This, my secret
Burn on
A MIRROR CINQUAIN
Inside
A secret flame
Burns strong even when dark
It lights my path, illuminates,
I walk
In light
Not brilliant but just enough
To keep me holding on
This, my secret
Burn on
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Sometimes, when we do concrete form of poetry, we are constricted and the sentiment could be compromised. But here, neither the structure nor the thought gets lost. So, brilliantly done! 🙂
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Thankyou so much. I have worked hard at this form of poetry, and it seems to suit me. I try to get layers of meaning into it. I like to write in formnrather than free verse, for some reason. Sometimes I do do free verse though. I write Rondeax, Sestinas, Sonnets, Pantoums, and various other forms. I love to experiment. Oh yes, and I love writing vilanelles! Thanks for taking the time to comment. Much appreciated.
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Me too. I used to do a lot of different forms, sestina being the toughest I have done. Lately, I’m doing more of free verse though, letting my emotions flow freely, I suppose.
And you’re most welcome.
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It is so good to have this discussion with you. I might post a sestina soon lol
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I look forward to it. For me, sestina no more. Lol. Will be posting a Con-verse soon. Yeah its good to find someone who has knowledge and understanding of poetry. 🙂
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So very inspiring.keep writing beautiful poems like this.
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Thankyou so much Sifan. I will try!
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