The cold light strikes
Like a thousand knives, cuts
Appear in your raw wounded flesh,
And then
Blood flows,
Deathly pale, you think you will die
Your body limp, folds up,
Words save you, “I
Love you.”

13 thoughts on ““I LOVE YOU”

  1. blindzanygirl

    Oh wow! Wonderful words, coming from you, who writes such anazing poetry. Thankyou. I often wonder if people get bored with reading this simple format all the time but it seems to suit me! X


  2. blindzanygirl

    I agree it is not simple really. I like the challe ge of trying to put layers of meaning into it. But I do care about people liking what I write, for I feel I wish to share the beauty of pietry, but often also its rawness. I have written some very raw poetry but tend not to post that.

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  3. blindzanygirl

    Thankyou. And I, love what you write too. You are in Indua aren’t you? I would love to know about life in India.


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