BLOTTED OUT

A DARKER POEM BUT TRUE

Waking
From my nightmare
I struggle to come round
Wondering where my life has gone
And how
It happened
Faces of people I love, gone
Blotted out by blind eyes
I live my death
Dying

19 thoughts on “BLOTTED OUT

  1. This is so beautifully expressed and extremely intense! You’re discussing something as dark as death but you have wrote about it in such an honest and real way. The faces of the people you love are blotted out but I hope and pray that you will always remember your family here. Much love ❤️

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  2. blindzanygirl

    Aww. Thankyou so much mvadi. Yes, this expresses my truth. Not often I write like this, but needed to today. Thankyou so much for your kind words. Xo

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  3. You say it is dark but in your honesty there is such beauty and truth – a feeling of eternity. I appreciate your letting us into your heart and sharing with us. In the intensity of your words is a power than simple, smiley happy words do not have. My prayers for your heart, your soul and being – this minute and always. with much love and many hugs. 🙂

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  4. blindzanygirl

    Thankyou so much krishna. What a beautiful thing to say. I have a deep need right now to “splurge my soul out” and I am doing just that this morning. I feel such deep things. With much love to you krishna xo

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  5. blindzanygirl

    Oh you are so right Punam. Have I remembered your name correctly? Many blessings to you. I hope you are well this day. Much love to you xo

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