A DARKER POEM BUT TRUE
Waking
From my nightmare
I struggle to come round
Wondering where my life has gone
And how
It happened
Faces of people I love, gone
Blotted out by blind eyes
I live my death
Dying
A DARKER POEM BUT TRUE
Waking
From my nightmare
I struggle to come round
Wondering where my life has gone
And how
It happened
Faces of people I love, gone
Blotted out by blind eyes
I live my death
Dying
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This is so beautifully expressed and extremely intense! You’re discussing something as dark as death but you have wrote about it in such an honest and real way. The faces of the people you love are blotted out but I hope and pray that you will always remember your family here. Much love ❤️
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Aww. Thankyou so much mvadi. Yes, this expresses my truth. Not often I write like this, but needed to today. Thankyou so much for your kind words. Xo
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You say it is dark but in your honesty there is such beauty and truth – a feeling of eternity. I appreciate your letting us into your heart and sharing with us. In the intensity of your words is a power than simple, smiley happy words do not have. My prayers for your heart, your soul and being – this minute and always. with much love and many hugs. 🙂
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Speechless 😶😶❤❤
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Damn! You put your soul out like no one else .
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Thankyou so much krishna. What a beautiful thing to say. I have a deep need right now to “splurge my soul out” and I am doing just that this morning. I feel such deep things. With much love to you krishna xo
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Thankyou so much Devika. I really need to do this. Thankyou for seeing it. Xo
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Thankyou so much Khushi
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Thanks for letting us share! Blessings, love and hugs! 🙂
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You’re very welcome Lorraine. I’m glad that you wrote about it since I love reading your work!
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Breathtakingly beautiful!!!! Your heart shines through in the words you write!
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Thankyou so much. Your wirds touch me deeply
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You are very welcome! Your writing is pretty amazing and it really shows just how wonderful you are!
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No Lorraine, you are not alone in living your death, we all are living, waiting for death. The faces of loved ones may be blotted but who needs eyes to feel love. Lots of love.
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Oh you are so right Punam. Have I remembered your name correctly? Many blessings to you. I hope you are well this day. Much love to you xo
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Yes, you have remembered correctly, bless you. I am well, thank you. Wish you a lovely day.
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Blessings xo
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Thankyou so much Alyssa. And you are too. Hugs
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Thankyou so much Akyssa
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