Morning of dreams
The sun shines
Night has gone
I embrace you
You are life
Death has departed
Streets of gold
Lined with hope
Call me today
Morning of dreams
The sun shines
Night has gone
I embrace you
You are life
Death has departed
Streets of gold
Lined with hope
Call me today
Ahhh so glad to read you filled with hope and enthusiasm..❤❤❤
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Thanks mich. I have to say though, that my poems do not always reflect how I personally am feeling. They are simply poems, though they will reflect all kinds of human feelings and experiences. I use the word “I” very often as a literary device. It makes what you are saying more pointed sometimes. One day, however, I might JUST post my TRUE state, and what my day is like each and every day, and of how I have basically been robbed of my personhood by my wretched disease. The exhaustion that this produces and the TRUE fatigue, whereby I can hardly sit up in bed sometins is exceptionally demoralising. Most people can just post. I can’t. It requires a huge effort. My poems, though, are just that. Poems. I keep making the decision not to post anything personal about myself, because it tends to draw quite judgemental comments from some people. Though then I do sometimes post ppersonal things still. This poem has hope in it. Do I FEEL hope? No, I don’t, except for beyond the grave,which this is really about, because my condition is deteriorating fast. It is hard to deal with. Very hard. But I like to post things with hope in, for the sake of others. I like to think that there is a life beyond, that is better than this. But I don’t know if there is one or not. Probably not.
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Thank you so much Loraine for this reply. I truly understand your sentiments. I say you are a very brave woman and i admire you for that.
Some can be really judgemental and there is nothing we can do about them .
You will be in my thoughts and i my prayers..be well and keep safe❤❤❤
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Thanks mich. I have just put a pos t up about things. Thankyou for the compliment. I don’t always feel strong and brave! I wish I did! Lots of love to you ❤️❤️❤️
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Sending you love Lorraine..❤❤❤
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