In the darkness I searched for you
Feeling around with my heart
Blinded by drugs I couldn’t see
I needed a hand to hold
Feeling around with my heart
The ache was stifling me
I needed a hand to hold
But you couldn’t see my pain
The ache was stifling me
Inside I was screaming your name
But you couldn’t see my pain
I spun around wildly in space
Inside I was screaming your name
I couldn’t find your hand
I spun around wildly in space
Desolation my friend
I couldn’t find your hand
Your eyes were blinded by light
Desolation my friend
I couldn’t see your light
Your eyes were blinded by light
You couldn’t see the dark
I couldn’t see your light
I was lost an abomination
You couldn’t see my dark
I disappeared from your sight
I was lost an abomination
We lost our souls that night
I disappeared from your sight
A scream rising from my throat
We lost our souls that night
In the darkness I’d searched for you
awesome poem so powerful! ❤
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Thankyou Carol Anne ❤️
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No problem 💝
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Very emotional and raw poem! I love the way the first lines are derived from the second line of the stanza preceding! Does this form have a name??
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Hi Val. It’s called a pantoum. I love them and I love doing them. I have posted a few of them in the past, but not many. 😊
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A wonderful poem, powerful and disturbing…
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Thankyou so much
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❤️ beautiful!
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Thank you ❤️
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You’re welcome my friend! 💛
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