Today the battle really was too great
I died in grief’s great arms in my dark night
Upon my soul was sorrow’s deadly weight
I knew that I had given up the fight
I sank into oblivion in the dark
No one could reach me there, and nor I them
And in that vacuum knew the truth so stark,
That never would there be a how or when,
Alone in that great pit that took me in
And gave me comfort of the strangest kind
I knew that in this life I’d never win,
True peace and rest I’d not in this world find,
So now my weary body do I hold
Waiting for the land that offers true gold
Wow. Powerful and raw words Lorraine. 💜
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Take care my friend 🖤🖤🖤
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A PERFECT SONNET! Never strayed from topic, nor from meter ~ not even one little strained rhyme! Totally emotionally intense despite the demanding intricacy of the form. This is so difficult to do! So rare! 👏👏👏👏👏
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Beautiful sonnet!
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Thank you so much Jenna ❤️
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This is Lorraine speaking but hubby typing. Thank you so much for your wonderful words ❤️❤️❤️
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I will and you also ❤️❤️🤗
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❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you Sadje this is Lorraine speaking I am feeling a bit better right now ❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you so much Bree they express what I really feel ❤️
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